Dayne Kinnaird Bike and Rider Preview ...

[D-Dub]

Bike

[D-Dub]

props to corpse for the base on the bike.

rider (he's also making the helmet :) )

[hoOk~]

bike looks ok, i dont see the point of making a new bike, theres already 6 million better one, and that rider skin need a nut sack full of work to be remotly good, its hella plain, get some pant and shirt texture on there, and the edges of the shit are too sharp, i dont know why the shit im telling u this cuz u prolly will just release total shit and get props for it by the gay crowd, but do what u must,,,,


btw i made a bike skin like that a while ago, with the teeth shit, its a cool bike

[Mungoman45]

As the title suggests, it's a "PREVIEW"...meaning, not finished yet, so most likely, Danny's looking for constructive reviews, so he can work on what needs to be done. I personally like the look of it "so far", however I'm with Hook on this one in the fact there would be a million and one other versions of his bike/rider out there, and i personally wouldn't waste my time making another, no matter how good ya got it...Custom's where it's at :cool:

[D-Dub]

yes that is just a preview. I accually havnt seen a rider made yet. nor a good resent rep of his bike. I know dan made one awhile ago thats was very nice, but his bike has changed alittle since then. and I took your advise Andy and i added some more details in the rider. still trying to figure out how i can add more details in the pants. blah ill find some way to ...

[fourTWENTY]

get rid of the ugly ass shirt overlaping shadowthats on the paints looks like a lil kid did that lol

[hoOk~]

lol, and use a denim pattern on the pants, the "white" lines on there look hella pristine, they need wrinkles in em, and theres stitching on em too, and the pants are just black, im sure theres pockets or stitching... im not too sure about the shads on the pattern on the shirt tho, it looks better, but needs more work, and again, the end of the shirt looks to sharp..... go and look at some of johns skins and get a few ideas...

[D-Dub]

added shadows (darker ones) thats for all the advise andy. now im gonna work on the stitching ...

[hoOk~]

looks better, pants still need textures, and so do the sleeves, they also need shadows, and the white lines are still crap, and add stitching

[fourTWENTY]

am i the only one who notices the black under the shit all ****ed up?

[hoOk~]

lmfao yeah, fergot to point that out, right where the belt is in the middle, looks like a cum stain, clean that out monica :)

[D-Dub]

well i like how they look so i uploded them ...

Rider (http://www.mcmfactory.com/display.php?cat=skins&id=1007)

Bike (http://www.mcmfactory.com/display.php?cat=skins&id=1006)

[hoOk~]

your gay, thats why, u have no pride in what you do

[D-Dub]

interesting

[sik_50]

good effort mate

[hoOk~]

no, its effort when u try, he didnet even try the fix the problems on it, so its shit effort